I delight in you

[Jon Asbury]

Love this!

[Nick Asbury]

So do I :)

[Sarah Farley]

This is beautiful ❤️

[Nick Asbury]

Thank you Sarah! 🙏

[Ted Williams]

Super enjoyable. Glad you are in my inbox.

[Nick Asbury]

Thanks Ted, really appreciate this

[William Jones]

Starting the song with the chorus is awesome and a great hook but the verses story does not match the chorus story.

My suggestion would be to keep the chorus but rewrite the verses and describe why "I delight in you" and not talk about yourself.

The melody verses seems to be awkward transistor, it needs to flow better. Changing up the verses can fix that.

For example:

Verse 1: you walk among the stars

Im captured by your charm,

I never knew i, could be so much in love

You will need a bridge

Just my humble opinion

[Nick Asbury]

Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment William, all feedback appreciated!

[Thomas Sharp]

Lovely

[Nick Asbury]

Bless you

[Nandita]

Hi Nick, Kate

Really enjoyed the song...

Look forward to more.

Thanks

Nandita

[Nick Asbury]

Thanks Nandita, really good to hear 🙏

[William Jones]

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